The Secret Language of Comics

Literacy Narrative Pt.2

Slide 1: In elementary school, my favorite activity was creative writing. My imagination would run wild as I would regularly give personalities to the fish I had caught with my dad the weekend before.

Slide 2: I enjoyed writing stories from the fish’s perspective in the first person; I would narrate their life story up until they saw their last glimpse of light as they were pulled onto my dad’s boat to become that night’s dinner.

Slide 3: As time progressed, the writing styles my teachers taught me drastically changed. The creative writing I had become accustomed to nearly vanished, replaced by book analyses and five paragraph essays.

Slide 4: It felt as though any creative expression was compressed until only template-based sentences were appreciated. Therefore, my writing began to closer resemble this concise style my teachers seemed to prefer. I was frustrated at first by this tamper on my creative expression. All I heard was “less is more”, and the more words with less meaning I removed, the better.

Slide 5: When I entered eighth grade, the focus shifted from writing to reading. This experience was detrimental to my writing skills because I was not practicing my writing and my class time and assignments were instead reading oriented.

Slide 6: We read frequently and were not assigned written responses. Our analyses were discussion-based and we spent class time either reading together or discussing what we had read for homework. As a result, my writing skills were not being developed. 

Slide 7: Three years later, I elected to be enrolled in AP Language and Composition. At this point in my high school career, I had come to terms with the fact that I was a more stem-leaning student. However, this teacher reignited my interest in writing. Through his focus on the technicals of writing, my teacher facilitated my viewing writing as an artform.

Slide 8: Following my time in AP Literature and Composition, it was time to come to Emory. The next phase of my writing development occurred when I was applying for the Emory investment group.

Slide 9: During this process, I completed a stock pitch and had my first experience with business writing.

Slide 10: I have a close friend who is very good at writing stock pitches, and he showed me to write them correctly.

Slide 11: I studies his formatting and wording, and eventually became able to write similarly to his.

Slide 12: Since I have chosen to pursue a career in business, specifically finance, this is the writing style that will be most relevant to my profession. Therefore, it is ideal that my writing has developed into this style and I am content with my writing progression towards concise, business writing.

Literacy Narrative 1 Reflection

In my literacy narrative essay, I explored my infatuation with books and due to my upbringing and how moving to America drastically changed my relationship with reading and writing forever.

After brainstorming about several poignant moments in my life, it felt natural and easy to write about my memories and my happy childhood bubble filled with Magic Treehouse and Rainbow Fairy novels. The freewriting exercise developed into two paragraphs about how my love for books started. However, the troubles once started when I was forced to relive and analyze my sophomore year of high school. To have something you treasured just ripped away from you was extremely disheartening. Okay, that sounds dramatic, but it really felt like I had nothing after witnessing the wide gap between my abilities and my classmates’. I wanted to convey this pain of understanding that I wasn’t good enough at something I had so deeply loved, and that everything I had known about literature was quite amiss.

I tried using a contrast of sentence length to show my misery. For example, one paragraph states: “I was so, very terribly mistaken. And I never fully recovered from being wrong.”

In retrospect, despite the enormous difficulties I encountered when I decided I hated English, it was an important moment of growth. I would never be the writer I am today without the help of my English teachers in high school. Ms. Dolan moved away after my first year, but I will never forget everything she has done for me. I did find it surprising when I realized how much time I spent reading and writing before moving to America, considering how much I’ve cried and broke down over English courses. I honestly forgot about my devotion to literature. Writing the essay brought back many estranged and sometimes unwelcome emotions about my past, but by the end, I felt that I received closure. Crafting the last paragraph brought upon an epiphany about how I want to continue: I want to keep writing to show everyone my culture.

Read the essay here.

Visual Physics Notes

I take a lot of notes on notability. It’s sort of therapeutic, using calligraphy to write notes and creating colorful diagrams to aid in visual learning. However, in this assignment, I wanted to make a mind map of everything we’ve learned so far in physics. The portion enclosed within the blue rectangle are sketches from my previous notes, and everything else is hand-drawn for this assignment. Creating this actually helped me prepare for my test since I was able to visualize the material better. Furthermore, two parts of the sketch are “step-by-step tips” that explained how to solve an electricity problem. In addition, an aliens and astronaut are stuck together in physics land and the only way out is to answer a question. Answering an electric field problem using the steps outlined in the notes was a great way to practice for the upcoming test. I really liked incorporating funny doodles and characters with dialogue within these notes, and I found myself having fun studying physics (never happened before). I also kept looking back at the notes because it was pretty, and before I knew it, the steps to solve an electric field problem were ingrained in my head.

I think I got carried away as I really enjoyed doodling—the planets sketch took more than two hours alone. I kept wanting to add more and more elements, despite having spent ages on this assignment. Maybe I could sell this study guide for some money.

Link to image: https://imgur.com/doiRplJ

Close Up Details

24-Hair Ring

Rambutan is one of the most delectable fruits found in Indonesia—it has a sweet, juicy center hidden in a red shell with soft spines, or hairs, sticking out. I used to wake up early and excitedly head to street markets in search of a pound of fresh, aromatic rambutan. Then, I would devour the 50 of these tiny, hairy, heavenly fruits in one day, and then complain at night that we ran out of rambutans. In the midst of my longing to go back home after more than a year of being away from my family, I wanted to incorporate some of my culture for this sunday sketch. After ruminating between exotic fruits, fried street snacks, and praying women at the mosque, I decided on rambutan, my favorite fruit. I struggled with finding the second image that would fit nicely with a rambutan. However, the inspiration was right in front of me: rings. I love rings, and I collect a numerous array of vintage rings. I found the image on Flickr, and this ring had an every similarly to the one I’m wearing on my left index finger. The second struggle came about when the editing websites wouldn’t work on my iPad. I wasn’t sure why, but I downloaded Photoshop Express as a result. But then, there was no precise cropping tool, and as you can see in the image, the cropping of the ring is… rough around the edges. The final image conveys my wish to go back home, compounded with a touch of my personality. Even though Jakarta is my home, I don’t feel like I fit in there after leaving when I was 15. In a way, this fusion of rambutan and a ring expresses my desire to create a new normal where I can exist. Honestly, if I saw a ring like this, I’d buy it instantly. It’s quite a statement piece.

Credits: https://www.flickr.com/photos/51391114@N04/5389323512/ https://www.flickr.com/photos/thegoodbrat/34166642516/in/photolist-U4bYto-7zutKZ-29zuS69-2h5jV7-4WdUns-9u8Lkn-ozLcvK-vT1zGx-9WmbVD-2a7PhjE-hBxsoz-556gxz-dhCCNV-539jt7-7njjJS-j5DSBW-7hvNoS-2ef2E33-rwi3Jt-qYfdjZ-9VFxm5-2g9Xjs1-8PNaqz-6VZFNL-dQiwqD-MsJcjw-aWcEW6-68Y2CV-6VZFz3-5vnWRR-5e6U3o-2a7Phsq-2TcTr5-2jx1rbK-qfGwaH-23dYZdy-kzJQzW-ahmTZm-64HPhb-dgEsFE-mNfcw-4nEsG3-aqy4va-2cm59L8-85LnmK-7RkbX6-aGDUpg-29zuS4L-5wRLNj-q7juow

Visual Note Taking

My visual note taking process obviously started with me taking real notes first. In my ISOM class, we learned about something called the “simple decision tree.” This is used to find the optimal decision in terms of spending money for profit. For example, renting or not renting an umbrella for a hotdog stand everyday in Seattle is a common situation that would occur. How much more would one make if they rented it every day? Is it worth renting? Will the profits be higher or lower if you rent? A real decision tree is similar to a visual table, with different lines emerging depending on the decision one makes. Making it into a literal tree makes a lot of sense. Each branch represents a certain decision. The shortest being the worst while the longest is the optimal. Visualizing the tree into a real tree actually helped with my understanding of what each branch does. Obviously, the one I drew would be super simple, but as they get more complicated there would be more branches.

Sketch 3: Visual Note Taking

I typically take written notes during class in the form of bullets or an outline. Therefore, this visual note-taking assignment forced me out of my comfort zone as I adapted my written notes I took during my Italian class into a visual representation. I enjoyed this assignment because it caused me to revisit my notes, approaching them from a creative point of view. I reflected on the visual representations of the vocabulary we are currently covering in my Italian class. Adapting these words and phrases into images reminded me of the Italian culture I love. Moving forward, I will strongly consider implementing visual note-taking into my daily habits during my online classes, particularly in my Italian class but in other courses as well.

Sunday Sketch 3 – Visual Note Taking

‘Visual Note Taking’ assignment helped me to find a strategy for understanding and memorizing the content. As my note is composed of images and is more colorful, I was able to better understand the confusing part of my BIO 142 class content. I was struggling on memorizing details of the model before, but I could be more familiarized with the model and details just by drawing. I found out that visualizing is important when I study, especially for Biology which requires memorizing. It was interesting to take a visual note, since it actually helped me a lot. I want to incorporate visual note taking for my chemistry class and other courses.

Ice Cream Lite

Coming up with an idea for the combo photo was actually very difficult, but after staring at the ceiling for a while, I noticed that the dangling lights kind of look like a tall glass with a stem flipped upside down. This lead me to thinking about ice cream, because I haven’t had it in a while. This where the idea for this sketch came from. This image looks like scooping ice cream from a glass, but at the same time it almost looks like a candle. The spoon and ice cream look almost like a wick and the light looks like an illuminated candle holder. This is where the name Ice Cream Lite comes from. Once the idea was generated, the cropping of images together was rather simple.

“Nahaufnahme von hausgemachter Schlagsahne auf einem Löffel” by marcoverch is licensed under CC BY 2.0

Image of the light was taken by my friend Javier Trujillo

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